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ESSAY DE NOTA ALTA · equivalente a Band 5 · ~175 palabras
Tarea: Do you think young people spend too much time on their phones?
Nowadays, there is growing concern about the amount of time young people spend on their phones. While mobile devices offer clear benefits, I believe that excessive use can have a largely negative impact.
↳Introducción limpia y segura: parafrasea sin explicarse de más y deja clara la opinión
One of the main reasons for this is that too much screen time can seriously affect concentration. This is particularly important because many young people rely on their phones for entertainment rather than productivity. For example, students who frequently check social media while studying often struggle to focus for extended periods. As a result, their academic performance may suffer.
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That said, it is also true that smartphones can be useful educational tools. They provide access to a wide range of resources, which can support independent learning. However, without proper self-regulation, these advantages are often outweighed by the distractions.
↳«That said»: una forma elegante de introducir el contraste, y la oración de relativo «which can support» añade sofisticación
Uno de los diez modelos anotados del pack, tal cual aparece. Los modelos están en inglés —es el idioma en el que escribirás el examen— y las notas, en español.